Autonomy is the dialectic to cooperation
And partnership
Everybody needs somebody
I heard it called the twin flame
A fire that burns on water
This is written for One Shot Wednesday, part of the One Stop Poetry site.
Autonomy is the dialectic to cooperation
And partnership
Everybody needs somebody
I heard it called the twin flame
A fire that burns on water
This is written for One Shot Wednesday, part of the One Stop Poetry site.
LucyFurLeaps 
Very simple, yet deep. With only a few words it had me picturing quite a bit! Here’s mine over at http://www.WorkspaceWritings.com http://tinyurl.com/4h9eqzg
Succinct yet poignant. Yes everyone needs someone x
Absolutely nice. Enjoyed it 🙂
Short, yet it accomplishes what it sets out to do in succinct, and potent evocation – everyone yearns, it is a fire burning in them, but all yearn for someone else…must say, though, the ending image is a fascinating one. Abrupt. Striking. This fire that burns on water…
“Autonomy is the dialectic to cooperation” Yes! Insightful on many levels. That particular line was so thought provoking right out of the gate. Excellent piece. Cheers
everyone does need someone…and the fire that burns on water…intriguing one shot
Bri said intriguing and i agree…great read this…cheers pete
Love the image and the idea of fire burning on water. Excellent one shot.
Here’s mine: The Likido Diet.
Wow. . . just wow. Wish I’d written this. Especially love the last two lines.
Thanks all for the positive comments! Much appreciated 🙂 More on Manipura to come…
Wonderful!!